--- title: "Do You Know Jason's Perfect Cold Email Template?" section: "Fundraising" sectionId: "fundraising" date: "2026-05" --- A cold email to an investor should read like a movie trailer — not the whole film. ## The formula Keep it short and to the point. A great cold email has two parts: **1. A short, personalised intro (1–2 sentences)** Explain why you're reaching out to this specific investor. Reference their portfolio, their writing, or their stated focus area. Generic openers get deleted. **2. The numbers** Then give them the facts that matter: - How many customers or users you have - How you make money - Last 3 months of revenue (month by month) - A link to a quick product demo (a Loom recording works well) If you have strong charts — include them. Show, don't tell. ## The key principles - **Short beats long.** The more words, the less likely it gets read. Every sentence must earn its place. - **Numbers over narrative.** Traction data is more convincing than any description of your vision. - **It's a trailer, not a movie.** The goal is to get a meeting, not to close a deal. You don't need to explain everything — just enough to make them curious. ## What to avoid - Long introductions about who you are and your background. - Jargon or marketing language. - Vague claims with no supporting data ("we're seeing incredible growth"). - Attachments — link to a deck instead, or offer to share it on request.